The struggle comes alive in the poem
enjoyed the rhyme and rhythm.
i recommend this.

hi swarajya,
The best index to a person's character is (a) how he treats people who can't do him any good, and (b) how he treats people who can't fight back.

Judge of your natural character by what you do in your dreams..... so its not about any relation but character... of a particular individual

dear mr. raj
I simply feel good when I receive comments from  people like you.

regards
sohini

thanks mr. Chhabra, here we scribbble numerous stuff, its a platform what we observe around we express. Love is a universal language we fall in love we fall out of love :))

Crazzy rushil u r someone new or someone old again with the old psycho games son

thanks good critic for dropping in and taking time, to read my work

Human nature is  to protect oneself from all types of risks in life.The knowledge of self defence makes them very analytical.A husband will watch his spouses every move very cautiously and vice versa.In the process suspecion develops rightly or wrongly.Why is the mutual trust and faith lacking in married couple?I personally feel that there is a  certain amount of guilt in everyione.The love diminishes by years.The love gets distributed to children and so the wife has every reason to feel the change in husband from what it was during honey moon days.
I liked the poetry.

Very well written and beautiful,sohini! Loved it!!

A strong poem wit ha good deal of tension and it's all conveyed in strong and original language...well-written

As i  read it, the poem is in two parts that captures this conflict, the second part being after the word mE

Suggestion:
a question mark migh tbe useful = mE?

and space after that  line in which mE? is in will help  readers see the second part more readily; if you don't like the idea of space then perhaps teh whole of the socond part can be in italics 

Good strong poem












(I  commented  earlier but  there was a system error )

The poe

hiiii.... baby...

Sad but written beautifully..I wish it is just a poem....Yash