how are you, I am back out here,
Wishing you a Merry Christmas....
I loved some parts of the poetry a lot....
Luv
sohini
She got so tired of false promises and empty lies,
Yet every time it happens, it takes her by surprise.
She wants to let go of you, and find her own way,
But shes so scared to fail, scared of what youd say.
The emptiness consumes her, her fear crippled by pride,
She wants to be beautiful to the one who wont open his eyes.
hey.anna.how are you..was a bit busy with loadzzzof things........ me back ...
Hey..sneha poetry was good..but do u find the eyes of the damsel projecting any power...... I am sorry if I'm discouraging you.... here the poetry you reflect about..animals geld wiith without little traces of wit...
anyways... I hope you won't mind... with my strange comments... gal...
ur friend...

hi..swayamprava....
I literally enjoyed the poem... or rather a fairy tale hidden in this sweet poetry... Loved its unique style. Oh..my wish I was the princess in disguise..
Keep the good work....
luv n keep churning more like this...
sohini....
..guess what in your past life I was your daughter...believe me... cause both mother and daughter..are funky and funny..and both are very much in mumbai...

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.... tell him about your "SOHINI SHONA "
Secret With In ~!~
Thanks Mr. Chhabra,
I am dazed cause I just happen to peep in Bijaya's work and i was a bit inspired with the picture, completely unawares but scribbled what I would have felt as I pictured myself with that girl.
Thanks for so much encouragement....
regards
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